Monday, January 10, 2005

...To whom it may concern

Tonight the world will end, the black cloud of regrets hangs over your heads,...heres to the things we never said the things we all regret, what of all our memories, all our hopes, all our dreams, are the empty feelings or vicious schemes, our memories betray us bitter sweet, they key to greatness, a window to defeat, the eternal sunshine to our ignorant bliss, the things i'll remember, the things i'll miss, i know theres no "I" in forever, however, your fading face makes me regret this endevor...so heres to the things we never said, the things we all regret, the eternal sunshine to our ignorant bliss a fading forever the things i'll miss!

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

The content is good.  It even has a slight rhyme scheme all throughout but it's not very consistent.  I'm not sure I really like much of your earlier work.